My country writing style !!

My country writing style is different from Americans. The first difference is the way we write. We always write things around the topic, but don't write out the topic or show there is the topic cause we want the reader feel the soul of the story we write. For example: English student writes about the beautiful girl then he could write: "She is a beautiful girl", but with our style of writing, we would write : "Although people say that: " Good wood better than good paint" but nowadays, good looking was paid more attentions. Then the beautiful person will have more opportunity. Yes, she is so lucky". The second things is about idea. We could put many addition ideas to make the essay more flexible and more emotion whether it's a contract essay, but we could use the comparison in this essay. We could put some small ideas to one paragraph if we don't have any supporting details to write for those ideas. On the other hand, American writing style doesn't want to mix two or more different things or ideas on one essay or paragraph cause reader could not understand what the writer's talking about. Finally,when I lived in Vietnam, I used to studied the way to write for Vietnam student. After that, I have come to the US and studied the way to write of American student. I feel that each education has its special good and interesting thing but they are not similar.